I filmed my initial idea, it didn't turn out as well as I planned. I need to redraft my ideas, put in some new ideas, aims and development to begin something better. Over looking the mark scheme has helped me to understand what I need to do. Creativity. Needs to have an understanding of form. With so many ideas I could mesh them all together to make a certain style of 4th wall breaking, dramatic convention of cinema.
Creative Project Aims: To evoke a sad response from the spectator.
Context: Idea from the spectatorship study. Planning: Continuing to develop the storyboard. Needs certain editing on the way through of the structuring of sentences and use of certain words and phrases that can be cut, or a synonym can be found. In addition, the word count needs to be taken into account of the extra parts of the introduction and sources.
Say a little more about personal engagement, how you found out about the film, why you decided to watch his films and more of them. Change the idea of slavery being a loophole. Can include more evidence of his critical success and his popular success, more towards the beginning of the script. Perhaps use more reviews/quotations about his films, and reference them explicitly in the script. Needs more analysis of the films, mine and reviewers, and use more examples of this. Perhaps use more of him as a director in his early career, how he got there for example. Cite and refer to the critics opinions on him. Need more development of the production slide, choice of subject, methods of working, apply more to the films of Shame and Hunger. Some good points but could be explored further, particularly the part about freedom and control in Hollywood filmmaking. More on the Auteur Theory. Suggest a way you would move the research forward. Use of primary research. My aims of my creative project idea so far is to develop this idea of focused gaming and how it effects young people. To show a particular way of the response they could have and following some of the articles I've read, some of the news stories I've heard that show this. I wanted to use certain ideas of role playing games and how they develop throughout, such as leveling up, gaining weapons and the perspective you use, could all be incorporated into this. At the moment, its the case of story boarding and getting filming done, however my idea is still developing and furthering. With my form of cinema, I wanted to include action and thriller sort of things, as well as this hold your breath emotional response to it. But I also think there's a sense of simpleness that's needed to have this game plan ahead, so I don't over complicate it.
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